Saturday, August 6, 2016


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  • Choose a character who experiences both internal and external conflict. Explain what the conflicts are, how they are created, and the effect that they have on both the character and the story. Additionally, include who or what the antagonist is and the effect that he/she/it has on the story.
 In the story “Marigolds” by Eugenia W.Collier Lizabeth the main character suffers internal conflicts as well as external conflicts. The internal conflict she faced was her not being completely a child nor completely a woman as she said in the story “the bewilderment of being neither child nor women and yet both at once”. She struggled with feeling innocents and feeling regret at the same time. Lizbeth still feels like a child because of the way she runs around and plays with her brother and the neighborhood children also because she doesn’t feel much towards her actions. While she also feels like a woman because she regrets what she has done afterwards. She soon comes to a breaking point between the two when destroying Miss Lottie’s flower patch of marigolds due to both her internal conflict and her external conflict. During the time when she has to face being a child or a woman she also faces a break in her family known as the external conflict. She overhears her mother and father talking about how her father is not in work and her mother has been supporting them as her father cries about it. Her father not being stabil affects her feeling towards how she sees her family now, while she use to see her father as a strong individual knowing he’s crying makes her feel as if her family is crumbling to pieces before her eyes. Later on in the story when she has grown up Miss Lottie the antagonist has never planted any more marigolds after Lizabeth had destroyed them making Lizabeth feel regret towards her actions later on. Soon Miss Lottie passes away and makes Lizabeth feel even more regret resulting in Lizabeth planting marigolds just like Miss Lottie did.

1 comment:

  1. something i agree with in your post in the external conflict. the reason i agree with the statement made is because in the short story i feel the reason she really wanted to destroy the marigold is because it was something bright in such a dark period of time for her family. she decided to go into her yard and destroy the marigolds after she heard how upset her dad was about jobs and the economy , she did not see anything bright during that period of time in her childhood. i also strongly agree with the internal conflict because whenever her brother and the neighborhood kids wanted to go bother ms.lottie she thought to herself how childish and how bad she felt, but she was also really bored. then after her childhood she was explaining how she felt like a women for growing out of that stage and realizing how big her mistake was. so i agree with her internal and external conflicts because it also covered the main points of why she did what she did in the short story both in her thoughts and actions that happened around her.

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